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The chart below shows the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. v.2

The chart below shows the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. v. 2
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of British students at one university in England able to speak languages other than English in the year 2000 and 2010. Overall slight fluctuations taken place in every language except German. Spanish is the highest spoken language in the year 2000 and 2010. in 2000, 20% of students were not able to speak another language, But in 2010 the percentage had sharply decreased to 10%, it shows more people learned other languages. Students speaking French language dropped from 15% to 10% in the year 2010. Spanish is the largest spoken language by the students in both the year 2000 and 2010, it climbed to 35% in the year 2010 from 30% in the year 2000. German language is constantly spoken by students n the year 2000 and 2010 with 10% of total percentage. Percentage of students speaking another language increased to 20% which was 15% in the year 2000. 10% of students are speaking two other languages other than English in 2000, it rose slightly to 15% in the year 2010.
The pie chart illustrates the
percentage
of British
students
at one university in England able to speak
languages
other
than English in the
year
2000 and 2010.
Overall
slight fluctuations taken place in every
language
except German. Spanish is the highest spoken
language
in the
year
2000 and 2010.

in
2000, 20% of
students
were not able to speak another
language
,
But
in 2010 the
percentage
had
sharply
decreased to 10%, it
shows
more
people
learned
other
languages
.
Students
speaking French
language
dropped from 15% to 10% in the
year
2010. Spanish is the largest spoken
language
by the
students
in both the
year
2000 and 2010, it climbed to 35% in the
year
2010 from 30% in the
year
2000. German
language
is
constantly
spoken by
students
n the
year
2000 and 2010 with 10% of total
percentage
.
Percentage
of
students
speaking another
language
increased to 20% which was 15% in the
year
2000. 10% of
students
are speaking two
other
languages
other
than English in 2000, it rose
slightly
to 15% in the
year
2010.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. v. 2

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