The provided column graphs show what the graduates from business and engineering majors of a university were doing after half a year of their graduation- in two different years. A glance at the diagrams reveals that the majority of those graduates were doing jobs after six months of their course completion and this ratio was slightly higher for the engineering alumni.
As can be seen from the given illustration, more than six business graduates out of ten of this university started working after six months of their graduation in year one and two while employed engineers' percentage at that time was around 75%. More business graduates continued higher education than engineering alumni in both years and the gap between these two groups was more or less 15%. Moreover, a higher percentage of business alumni took their time out, around 8% to be more precise, than the engineering graduates, who accounted for nearly 2%-3% in this category. Finally, roughly one out of ten who completed their engineering degree was seeking for a job and their ratio was more than double than the business graduates who were also looking for a job. Interestingly, in the second year, a slightly higher percentage from both groups had jobs and a marginally fewer were enrolled in further studies than the first year.
The provided column graphs
show
what the
graduates
from
business
and
engineering
majors of a university were doing after half a
year
of their graduation- in two
different
years. A glance at the diagrams reveals that the majority of those
graduates
were doing
jobs
after six months of their course completion and this ratio was
slightly
higher for the
engineering
alumni.
As can be
seen
from the
given
illustration, more than six
business
graduates
out of ten of this university
started
working after six months of their graduation in
year
one and two while employed engineers' percentage at that time was around 75%. More
business
graduates
continued higher education than
engineering
alumni in both years and the gap between these two groups was more or less 15%.
Moreover
, a higher percentage of
business
alumni took their time out, around 8% to be more precise, than the
engineering
graduates
, who accounted for
nearly
2%-3%
in this category.
Finally
, roughly one out of ten who completed their
engineering
degree was seeking for a
job
and their ratio was more than double than the
business
graduates
who were
also
looking for a
job
.
Interestingly
, in the second
year
, a
slightly
higher percentage from both groups had
jobs
and a
marginally
fewer
were enrolled
in
further
studies than the
first
year
.
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