The pie charts outline the ratio of food budget people spent on preparing meals at home and on restaurant meals and the line graph delineates what type of outside food people preferred between 1970 and 2000. Overall, people’s spending on restaurant meals increased significantly over the period and fast food became more popular over the time.
As is presented in the illustration, people spent 10% of their food budget to have outside meals in 1970 and this spending ratio enlarged each decade. In 1990, they spent more than one-third of the meal budget to eat at restaurants and finally in 2000, people spent half of their food budget to eat outside.
The line graph shows that people ate 20 fast food meals in 1970 and the same number of sitdown eatery meals in this year. After a decade, the number of sitdown dining occurrence went slightly higher than the number of fast food meals they had. However, the popularity of fast food remarkably increased and people ate as high as 90 meals in fast food shops in 2000 when they had around 50 sitdown meals in this year.
The pie charts outline the ratio of
food
budget
people
spent
on preparing
meals
at home and on restaurant
meals
and the line graph delineates what type of outside
food
people
preferred between 1970 and 2000.
Overall
,
people’s
spending on restaurant
meals
increased
significantly
over the period and
fast
food
became more popular over the time.
As
is presented
in the illustration,
people
spent
10% of their
food
budget
to have outside
meals
in 1970 and this spending ratio enlarged each decade. In 1990, they
spent
more than one-third of the
meal
budget
to eat at restaurants and
finally
in 2000,
people
spent
half of their
food
budget
to eat outside.
The line graph
shows
that
people
ate
20
fast
food
meals
in 1970 and the same number of
sitdown
eatery
meals
in this year. After a decade, the number of
sitdown
dining occurrence went
slightly
higher than the number of
fast
food
meals
they had.
However
, the popularity of
fast
food
remarkably
increased and
people
ate
as high as 90
meals
in
fast
food
shops in 2000 when they had around 50
sitdown
meals
in this year.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
41Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes