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The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. v.8

The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. v. 8
The pie charts outline the ratio of food budget people spent on preparing meals at home and on restaurant meals and the line graph delineates what type of outside food people preferred between 1970 and 2000. Overall, people’s spending on restaurant meals increased significantly over the period and fast food became more popular over the time. As is presented in the illustration, people spent 10% of their food budget to have outside meals in 1970 and this spending ratio enlarged each decade. In 1990, they spent more than one-third of the meal budget to eat at restaurants and finally in 2000, people spent half of their food budget to eat outside. The line graph shows that people ate 20 fast food meals in 1970 and the same number of sitdown eatery meals in this year. After a decade, the number of sitdown dining occurrence went slightly higher than the number of fast food meals they had. However, the popularity of fast food remarkably increased and people ate as high as 90 meals in fast food shops in 2000 when they had around 50 sitdown meals in this year.
The pie charts outline the ratio of
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at home and on restaurant
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and the line graph delineates what type of outside
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preferred between 1970 and 2000.
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increased
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fast
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became more popular over the time.

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10% of their
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to have outside
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in 1970 and this spending ratio enlarged each decade. In 1990, they
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more than one-third of the
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to eat at restaurants and
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in 2000,
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people
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half of their
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to eat outside.

The line graph
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in 1970 and the same number of
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in this year. After a decade, the number of
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dining occurrence went
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they had.
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remarkably
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as high as 90
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shops in 2000 when they had around 50
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in this year.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. v. 8

Academic
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3 paragraphs
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6.0
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