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The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average Australian family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. v.2

The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average Australian family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. v. 2
The pie charts elucidate the ratio of food budget average Australian families spent for preparing foods at home and for dining in eateries in four decades. The line graph outlines the number of meals these Australian families ate in two types of restaurants between 1970 and 2010. As is observed, Australians’ budget for outdoor meals increased overwhelmingly over the decades and fast food meals were more popular than that of sit-down restaurants among them. The data suggest that preparing food at home in Australia was the main trend in 1980 and only 15% food fund were spent to dine outside but the spending ratio to have restaurant meals increased to 35% next decades. In 2000, average Australians spent exactly half of their food budget to eat at bistros. Interestingly they spend sixth-tenth of their budget to enjoy restaurant foods in 2010 which was exactly four times higher than that of 1980. The table data indicates that an Australian ate around 40 restaurant meals in 1970 of which 20 was fast food meals. Over the period, people started having more restaurant meals and fast food became highly popular with almost 120 intakes in 2010 against just over 60 sit-down restaurant meals.
The pie charts elucidate the ratio of
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food
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average Australian families spent for preparing
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foods
at home and for dining in eateries in four decades. The line graph outlines the number of
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meals
these Australian families
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ate
in two types of
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restaurants
between 1970 and 2010. As
is observed
, Australians’
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budget
for outdoor
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meals
increased
overwhelmingly
over the decades and
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fast
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food
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meals
were more popular than that of sit-down
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restaurants
among them.

The data suggest that preparing
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food
at home in Australia was the main trend in 1980 and
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only
15%
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food
fund
were spent
to dine outside
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but
the spending ratio to have
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restaurant
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meals
increased to 35%
next
decades. In 2000, average Australians spent exactly half of their
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food
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budget
to eat at bistros.
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they spend sixth-tenth of their
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budget
to enjoy
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restaurant
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foods
in 2010 which was exactly four times higher than that of 1980.

The table data indicates that an Australian
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ate
around 40
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restaurant
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meals
in 1970 of which 20 was
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fast
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food
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meals
. Over the period,
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people
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started
having more
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restaurant
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meals
and
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fast
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food
became
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popular with almost 120 intakes in 2010 against
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just
over 60 sit-down
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restaurant
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meals
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average Australian family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. v. 2

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
200 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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