The bar graph compares the numbers of males and females who are taking evening courses at a particular British secondary school and the pie chart illustrates the age profile of these students.
Overall, there are more women than men attending evening classes in one of Britain' s secondary schools. It is also noticeable that evening courses are more popular among older adults.
According to the bar graph, drama, painting and language courses all attracted more females than men, while sculpture is the only class with a higher number of males, and is only taken by a small minority with 15 people in total. Language class has the most students overall, with 40 women and 20 men whereas painting is a popular choice among both genders attracting 30 females and around 25 males. There are 20 women in drama class which is 2 times higher than male participants.
People who are attending the evening lessons are mostly 50 and above at 42%, followed by the age group of 40-49 with 26%. The middle age group represents 16 % of the total attendees, while younger adults are in minority, with only 11% of students aged 20-29 and a mere 5% of under 20. 
The bar graph compares the numbers of  
males
 and females who are taking evening courses at a particular British secondary school and the pie chart illustrates the age profile of these students. 
Overall
, there are more women than  
men
 attending evening  
classes
 in one of  
Britain&
#039; s secondary schools. It is  
also
 noticeable that evening courses are more popular among older adults.
According to the bar graph, drama, painting and language courses all attracted more females than  
men
, while sculpture is the  
only
  class
 with a higher number of  
males
, and is  
only
 taken by a  
small
 minority with 15  
people
 in total. Language  
class
 has the most students  
overall
, with 40 women and 20  
men
 whereas painting is a popular choice among both genders attracting 30 females and around 25  
males
. There are 20 women in drama  
class
 which is 2 times higher than male participants. 
People
 who are attending the evening lessons are  
mostly
 50 and above at 42%, followed by the age group of 40-49 with 26%. The middle age group represents 16 % of the total attendees, while younger adults are in minority, with  
only
 11% of students aged 20-29 and a mere 5% of under 20. 
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