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The charts below show the number of working hours per week in industrial sector in four European countries in 2002 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant v.2

The charts below show the number of working hours per week in industrial sector in four European countries in 2002
The given column graphs compare the number of hours spent on work per week by industrial workers in France, Denmark, Sweden and the UK in 2002. In three countries, it can be seen that the maximum workers worked 36-40 hours, but in France the maximum workers worked 31-35 hours per week. In France, approximately half the workers worked for 31-35 hours per week. The percentage of people who worked for 36-40 hours and 46-50 hours was 35% and 20% respectively. The figures for the rest of the working hours accounted for around 10% workers each. Denmark and Sweden witnessed the highest proportion of people working for 36-40 hours, which was quite different from that of France. The second and the third place came from 31- 35 hours and 41-45 hours workers (25% and 10% in Denmark; 35% and 30% in Sweden). The proportion of people working for the remaining hours was higher in Denmark than in Sweden. It is interesting to note that in the UK, the percentage of people working 50+ hours was the maximum. Almost 50% worked 36-40 hours per week. Overall, France was a country where the people worked for the least hours, where as the Swedish people spent the most time on work among the people from four different countries.
The
given
column graphs compare the number of
hours
spent on work per week by

industrial
workers
in France, Denmark, Sweden and the UK in 2002. In three countries, it
can


be
seen
that the maximum
workers
worked 36-40
hours
,
but
in France the maximum

workers
worked 31-35
hours
per week.

In France, approximately half the
workers
worked for 31-35
hours
per week. The
percentage


of
people
who worked for 36-40
hours
and 46-50
hours
was 35% and 20%
respectively
. The

figures
for the rest of the
working
hours
accounted for around 10%
workers
each.

Denmark and Sweden witnessed the highest proportion of
people
working
for 36-40 hours,

which was quite
different
from that of France. The second and the third place came from 31-

35
hours
and 41-45
hours
workers
(25% and 10% in Denmark; 35% and 30% in Sweden). The

proportion of
people
working
for the remaining
hours
was higher in Denmark than in

Sweden.

It is interesting to note that in the UK, the percentage of
people
working
50+
hours
was the

maximum
. Almost 50% worked 36-40
hours
per week.

Overall
, France was a country where the
people
worked for the least
hours
,
where as
the

Swedish
people
spent the most time on work among the
people
from four
different


countries
.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS academic The charts below show the number of working hours per week in industrial sector in four European countries in 2002

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