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The charts below show temperature and rainfall in the Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words v.2

The charts below show temperature and rainfall in the Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate
The column charts below demonstrate the rainfall and temperature that take place in the Equatorial and Mediterranean climate throughout a year. Starting with Equatorial climate, the months, January, November, and December in which more than 200 cubic millimeter rainfall takes place that is higher than in other months. Coming to the rest of the months, the rainfall is below 200 cubic millimeters. Turning to the temperature, which starts inclining from January to December, exhibits a minor increase between the April and July that is noticed around 270 degrees Celcius. Moving further to Mediterranean Climate, the rainfall, which is the highest in the month of January and December, is noticed 150 and 170 cubic millimeters, respectively; in the rest of the months: February and November, it is considered to be below100 cubic millimeters; the temperature, which increases rapidly to over 25 degrees Celcius in the month of August, decreases by 15 degrees Celcius in December. Overall, the Equatorial climate is higher than in the Mediterranean climate in terms of rainfall and temperature over a period of 12 months.
The column charts below demonstrate the
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rainfall
and
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temperature
that take place in the Equatorial and Mediterranean
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climate
throughout a year.

Starting with Equatorial
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climate
, the
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months
, January, November, and December in which more than 200 cubic millimeter
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rainfall
takes place
that is
higher than in other
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months
. Coming to the rest of the
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months
, the
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rainfall
is below 200 cubic millimeters. Turning to the
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temperature
, which
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starts
inclining from January to December, exhibits a minor increase between the April and July that
is noticed
around 270 degrees
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Celcius
.

Moving
further
to Mediterranean
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Climate
, the
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rainfall
, which is the highest in the
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month
of January and December,
is noticed
150 and 170 cubic millimeters,
respectively
; in the rest of the
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months
: February and November, it
is considered
to be below100 cubic millimeters; the
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temperature
, which increases
rapidly
to over 25 degrees
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Celcius
in the
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month
of August, decreases by 15 degrees
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Celcius
in December.

Overall
, the Equatorial
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climate
is higher than in the Mediterranean
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climate
in terms of
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rainfall
and
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temperature
over a period of 12
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months
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic The charts below show temperature and rainfall in the Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate

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4 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
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