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The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four European countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four European countries between 1990 and 1999.
The chart illustrates a number of car thefts in Great Britain, Sweden, France, and Canada over a period of 9 years from 1990 to 1999. It is clear that these figures had considerable variations and particularly, vehicles stolen in Great Britain were significantly higher than the others. In 1990, the number of car thefts in Great Britain was about 17 per thousand, whereas vehicles stolen in the other countries were a much lower. Then, France and Canada experienced downward trends in the following years and the general trend of Sweden car thefts was a major increasing. Especially, the figure of cars stolen in Sweden which had been so low surged up just under 15 per thousand. Simultaneously, vehicular thefts in Great Britain continued to increase and peaked at approximately 20 per thousand after 6 years, but then it fell to the lowest point at around 16 per thousand. Lastly, in France and Canada, the number of car thefts maintained decreasing and equalized in 1999.
The chart illustrates a number of
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Britain, Sweden, France, and Canada over a period of 9 years from 1990 to 1999.

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that these figures had considerable variations and
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Britain were
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higher than the others.

In 1990, the number of
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in
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Britain was about 17 per thousand, whereas vehicles stolen in the other countries were a much lower. Then, France and Canada experienced downward trends in the following years and the general trend of Sweden
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car
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was a major increasing.

Especially
, the figure of
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cars
stolen in Sweden which had been
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low surged up
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under 15 per thousand.
Simultaneously
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in
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Britain continued to increase and peaked at approximately 20 per thousand after 6 years,
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then it fell to the lowest point at around 16 per thousand.
Lastly
, in France and Canada, the number of
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maintained decreasing and equalized in 1999.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four European countries between 1990 and 1999.

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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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