The charts below show the average number of calories(that is, amount of energy in food and drink) that a person consumes daily in five countries, and the percentage of the adult population that was overweight or obese in 2013 in those countries. Summarize v.1
The charts below show the average number of calories(that is, amount of energy in food and drink) that a person consumes daily in five countries, and the percentage of the adult population that was overweight or obese in 2013 in those countries. Summarize v. 1
The given charts depict the mean amount of calories gained by a person daily and the percentage of overweight adult population in 2013 in five different countries.
The recommended daily calorie limit for men is around 2400 calories, and that of the women is around 2100 calories. USA, Italy and UK over achieved the advised daily calorie intake, while Democratic Republic of Congo fell short of it by large. India failed to meet the recommended daily calorie consumption for men. The people of USA on average consumed the maximum calories in a day which was 3750 calories, in contrast to citizens of Democratic Republic of Congo who had the least at 1590 calories.
USA had the largest percentage of obese adult population which was around 70%, whereas Democratic Republic of Congo had 30% overweight people, being the least among the five countries. Italy, UK and India respectively had 68%, 65% and 43% of mature obese individuals.
So, to conclude, the people of USA had the maximum calories daily and a large percentage of them were obese while the citizens of Democratic Republic of Congo consumed the least calories along with the lowest percentage of obese adults.
The
given
charts depict the mean amount of calories gained by a person
daily
and the
percentage
of overweight adult population in 2013 in five
different
countries.
The recommended
daily
calorie limit for
men
is around 2400 calories, and that of the women is around 2100 calories. USA, Italy and UK over achieved the advised
daily
calorie intake, while
Democratic
Republic of Congo fell short of it by large. India failed to
meet
the recommended
daily
calorie consumption for
men
. The
people
of USA
on average consumed the maximum calories in a day which was 3750 calories,
in contrast
to citizens of
Democratic
Republic of Congo who had the least at 1590 calories.
USA had the largest
percentage
of
obese
adult population which was around 70%, whereas
Democratic
Republic of Congo had 30% overweight
people
, being the least among the five countries. Italy, UK and India
respectively
had 68%, 65% and 43% of mature
obese
individuals.
So
,
to conclude
, the
people
of USA
had the maximum calories
daily
and a large
percentage
of them were
obese
while the citizens of
Democratic
Republic of Congo consumed the least calories along with the lowest
percentage
of
obese
adults.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes