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The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, 2010. v.3

The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, 2010. v. 3
The information regarding the awarded degrees in four different fields by National University in the span of three decades has been depicted in the pie charts. The significant feature of this graph portrays that maximum degrees were granted in computer science field by National University as its proportion was accounted for 45% in 2010 which had increased gradually from 30% since 1990. Moving further to business stream, the percentage of awarded degrees was noticed as 30% in 1990 which led to a decline of 10% during 2000. Then, it descended slightly to 15% in 2010. An identical pattern was followed by the ratio of awarded degrees in both law and medicine departments. In the case of Medicine department, the proportion of granted degrees was almost a quarter during 1990 and 2010, however, the proportion was 30% in 2000. Moreover, the percentage of granted degrees in law was the lowest, 10% in 2000 and slightly higher in other two decades. Hence, it can be deduced that more students graduated from computer science from National University than they did from other faculties.
The information regarding the awarded
degrees
in four
different
fields by National University in the span of three decades has
been depicted
in the pie charts.

The significant feature of this graph portrays that maximum
degrees
were granted
in computer science field by National University as its proportion
was accounted
for 45% in 2010 which had increased
gradually
from 30% since 1990. Moving
further
to business stream, the percentage of awarded
degrees
was noticed
as 30% in 1990 which led to a decline of 10% during 2000. Then, it descended
slightly
to 15% in 2010.

An identical pattern
was followed
by the ratio of awarded
degrees
in both law and medicine departments. In the case of Medicine department, the proportion of granted
degrees
was almost a quarter during 1990 and 2010,
however
, the proportion was 30% in 2000.
Moreover
, the percentage of granted
degrees
in law was the lowest, 10% in 2000 and
slightly
higher in other two decades.

Hence
, it can
be deduced
that more students graduated from computer science from National University than they did from other faculties.
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6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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