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The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country
The diagram illustrates the proportion of agricultural products in two particular areas of the nation. Overall, it is clear to see that the percentage of vegetables and grain in the East is very different from those in Western Region. Besides, meat products occupies the same rate in both areas. The percentage of vegetables is at the highest place, about 20% in Eastern Region while in the West side, it is a very small number, only 5%. In contrast, grain in the East has the smallest percentage 45% of all agricultural products and they produce those three times the grain percentage in the West than in the East. The percentage of meat at both regions is exactly the same, 35% of all products. Meanwhile, the West has 15% of dairy products and the East has twice times the percentage of dairy products than the West,
The diagram illustrates the proportion of agricultural
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in two particular areas of the nation.

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, it is
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to
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that the
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of vegetables and grain in the East is
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different
from those in Western Region.
Besides
, meat
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products
occupies the same rate in both areas.

The
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percentage
of vegetables is at the highest place, about 20% in Eastern Region while in the West side, it is a
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very
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small
number,
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only
5%.
In contrast
, grain in the East has the smallest
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percentage
45% of all agricultural
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products and
they produce those three times the grain
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percentage
in the West than in the East.

The
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percentage
of meat at both regions is exactly the same, 35% of all
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products
. Meanwhile, the West has 15% of dairy
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products
and the East has twice times the
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percentage
of dairy
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products
than the West,
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IELTS academic The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country

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4 paragraphs
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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