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the charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow a city in Scotland in 2010 v.1

the charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow a city in Scotland in 2010 v. 1
The given charts compares educational degree according to five different age groups and gender in a city in Scotland in 2010. Overall, educational levels appeared to be directly proportional to age range and only minor differences was seen between men and women in terms of academic qualifications. Over 70 per cent Glasgow residents aged from 16 to 50 gained university degree, this figure fell steadily to just a half with the fourth age group and a quarter with those over 75 years old. In contrast, the rate of people in Glasgow have no educational degree increased dramatically from only 9 per cent with the first three age groups to nearly three quarters with the final age group. Those attained school certificate remained relatively stable over four initial age groups at about 20 per cent, then took a free fall to only 3 per cent with those who were over 75 years old. In terms of the pie chart, both the rate of men and women gained school certificate were the same at about 33 per cent. The proportion of Glasgow male had tertiary education was slightly higher than female, while the trend for those men and women who have no qualifications was reverse.
The
given
charts compares educational degree according to five
different
age
groups
and gender in a city in Scotland in 2010.

Overall
, educational levels appeared to be
directly
proportional to
age
range and
only
minor differences was
seen
between
men
and women in terms of academic qualifications.

Over 70 per cent Glasgow residents aged from 16 to 50 gained university degree, this figure fell
steadily
to
just
a half with the fourth
age
group
and a quarter with those over 75 years
old
.
In contrast
, the rate of
people
in Glasgow have no educational degree increased
dramatically
from
only
9 per cent with the
first
three
age
groups
to
nearly
three quarters with the final
age
group
. Those attained school certificate remained
relatively
stable over four initial
age
groups
at about 20 per cent, then took a free fall to
only
3 per cent with those who were over 75 years
old
.

In terms of the pie chart, both the rate of
men
and women gained school certificate were the same at about 33 per cent. The proportion of Glasgow male had tertiary education was
slightly
higher than female, while the trend for those
men
and women who have no qualifications was reverse.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic the charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow a city in Scotland in 2010 v. 1

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