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The table below shows the result of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any compariso v.2

The table below shows the result of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.
Given is the table illustrating the questionnaire about the feedbacks of a city sports club including range of activities, infrastructures, and open schedule. From the club' s point of view, female members occupied the most percentage on feeling very satisfied about opening hours. By contrast, male members who do not feel pleased about the variety of activities receiving the least expenditure in this group. For the female, the rate of people who really excited about the open time is highest, at 72%, while the figure for the feeling about club facilities is significantly lower, at 64%. Women are extremely satisfied and satisfied about the club' s activities accounted for 35%. Meanwhile, only 3% from thinking not satisfied about opening hours in the group. The proportion of male who are content the most about the facilities in club is highest, at 63%. Members are also interested in the range of activites and open schedule made up 55% and 44% respectively, while, 40% and 19% of men tend to be satisfied of this category. In contrast, spending on the item of believing the sort of activities is not good is the smallest proportion, at 5%.
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about opening hours. By contrast, male members who do not feel
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pleased
about the variety of
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activities
receiving the least expenditure in this group.

For the female, the rate of
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who
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excited about the open time is highest, at 72%, while the figure for the feeling about
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facilities is
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lower, at 64%. Women are
extremely
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and
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satisfied
about the
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activities
accounted for 35%. Meanwhile,
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3% from thinking not
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satisfied
about opening hours in the group.

The proportion of male who are content the most about the facilities in
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club
is highest, at 63%. Members are
also
interested in the range of
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activites
and open schedule made up 55% and 44%
respectively
, while, 40% and 19% of
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men
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of this category.
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, spending on the item of believing the sort of
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activities
is not
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good
is the smallest proportion, at 5%.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the result of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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