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The table below shows the result of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any compariso v.2

The table below shows the result of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.
Given is the table illustrating the questionnaire about the feedbacks of a city sports club including range of activities, infrastructures, and open schedule. From the club' s point of view, female members occupied the most percentage on feeling very satisfied about opening hours. By contrast, male members who do not feel pleased about the variety of activities receiving the least expenditure in this group. For the female, the rate of people who really excited about the open time is highest, at 72%, while the figure for the feeling about club facilities is significantly lower, at 64%. Women are extremely satisfied and satisfied about the club' s activities accounted for 35%. Meanwhile, only 3% from thinking not satisfied about opening hours in the group. The proportion of male who are content the most about the facilities in club is highest, at 63%. Members are also interested in the range of activites and open schedule made up 55% and 44% respectively, while, 40% and 19% of men tend to be satisfied of this category. In contrast, spending on the item of believing the sort of activities is not good is the smallest proportion, at 5%.
Given
is the table illustrating the questionnaire about the feedbacks of a city sports
club
including range of
activities
, infrastructures, and open schedule.

From the
club&
#039; s point of view, female members occupied the most percentage on feeling
very
satisfied
about opening hours. By contrast, male members who do not feel
pleased
about the variety of
activities
receiving the least expenditure in this group.

For the female, the rate of
people
who
really
excited about the open time is highest, at 72%, while the figure for the feeling about
club
facilities is
significantly
lower, at 64%. Women are
extremely
satisfied
and
satisfied
about the
club&
#039; s
activities
accounted for 35%. Meanwhile,
only
3% from thinking not
satisfied
about opening hours in the group.

The proportion of male who are content the most about the facilities in
club
is highest, at 63%. Members are
also
interested in the range of
activites
and open schedule made up 55% and 44%
respectively
, while, 40% and 19% of
men
tend to be
satisfied
of this category.
In contrast
, spending on the item of believing the sort of
activities
is not
good
is the smallest proportion, at 5%.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic The table below shows the result of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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