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The chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer's total car sales in different regions from 2006 to 2010. v.2

The chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer's total car sales in different regions from 2006 to 2010. v. 2
The presented bar chart illustrates the distribution of sales as the percentage from car producer in various regions namely: South American, North American, Asia, and Europe between 2006 and 2010. In general, while the percentage of cars sold in Europe increased considerately, this figure for North America saw the opposite trend. Another interesting point is that the proportion of both Asia and South America experienced a fluctuation during the surveyed time. In the first year, 30% of the total earning came from Europe, and Asia, in which both continents had the same amount. However, the period from 2007 to 2010 marked a significant growth in the sale got by European manufacturers to a half. Furthermore, the amount of money collected from manufacturers in Asia peaked at 38% in 2008 before reducing minimally to the value as same as its first value, in 2010. By contrast, this figure in South America bottomed out at 5% in 2009 then recovered again to 11%. In terms of North America, there was an enormous decline in its sale to only 9% in 2010 from 29% in 2006.
The presented bar chart illustrates the distribution of sales as the percentage from car producer in various regions
namely
: South American, North American, Asia, and Europe between 2006 and 2010.

In general
, while the percentage of cars sold in Europe increased
considerately
, this figure for North America
saw
the opposite trend. Another interesting point is that the proportion of both Asia and South America experienced a fluctuation during the surveyed time.

In the
first
year, 30% of the total earning came from Europe, and Asia, in which both continents had the same amount.
However
, the period from 2007 to 2010 marked a significant growth in the sale
got
by European manufacturers to a half.
Furthermore
, the amount of money collected from manufacturers in Asia peaked at 38% in 2008
before
reducing
minimally
to the value as same as its
first
value, in 2010. By contrast, this figure in South America bottomed out at 5% in 2009 then recovered again to 11%. In terms of North America, there was an enormous decline in its sale to
only
9% in 2010 from 29% in 2006.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer's total car sales in different regions from 2006 to 2010. v. 2

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