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The chart give information about the percentage of the world’s forest and timber in five different regions. v.2

The chart give information about the percentage of the world’s forest and timber in five different regions. v. 2
The charts illustrate the proportion of the forest of the world and the amount of timber in five diverse regions. The first pie chart gives out data about the percentage of world forest in five varied areas. North America makes up one fourth of the total world’s forest, stands behind Africa with 2% lesser. The figure for Europe, South America and Asia witnesses a stabilization around 20% with 18%, 16% and 14% correspondingly. However, the data for the percentage of timber in each region demonstrates differs from its figure for the world’s forest. Africa experiences a dramatic divergence from its above data with nearly one tenth of the total field. And North America reaches 1st position in the number of timber with 30%. Three remaining sectors remains its maintenance with little variation, from 18% to 23% of Asia, Europe and South America. It is conspicuous that regions with high percentage of forest customarily goes along with high data for the timber in each places, apart from Africa.
The charts illustrate the proportion of the
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forest
of the
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world
and the amount of
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timber
in five diverse regions.

The
first
pie chart gives out
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data
about the percentage of
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world
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forest
in five varied areas. North America
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makes
up one fourth of the total
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world’s
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forest
, stands behind Africa with 2% lesser. The figure for Europe, South America and Asia witnesses a stabilization around 20% with 18%, 16% and 14%
correspondingly
.

However
, the
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data
for the percentage of
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timber
in each region demonstrates differs from its figure for the
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world’s
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forest
. Africa experiences a dramatic divergence from its above
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data
with
nearly
one tenth of the total field. And North America reaches 1st position in the number of
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timber
with 30%. Three remaining sectors remains its maintenance with
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little
variation, from 18% to 23% of Asia, Europe and South America.

It is conspicuous that regions with high percentage of
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forest
customarily
goes along with high
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data
for the
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timber
in each
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places
, apart from Africa.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS academic The chart give information about the percentage of the world’s forest and timber in five different regions. v. 2

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4 paragraphs
167 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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