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The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five proportions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008 v.2

The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five proportions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008 v. 2
The bar chart illustrates, the ratio of men, women and children who consumed five proportions of fruits and vegetables every day in these 8 years between 2001 and 2008 in the United Kingdom. Overall, it can be see that the highest percentage of all the people was women. While, the adolescents constantly remained the lowest proportion of eating healthy fruits and vegetables. In 2001, ladies have eaten 22% of the vegetables and fruits. After next five years (2006) the figure of the females have increased and reached to peak level which was round about 35 percent. Males and teenagers, the percentage remained stable in 2001, 2002 and 2003. For the first three years the adult’s ratio was approximately 13% while the young age people were about 18%. Male consumption raised in 2006 to 28% and it also remained stable in 2007 but in 2008 it showed a minor decrease which was almost 27%. Meanwhile, the growth of figure in children also inclined and reached to 25% in 2007 but after following year it dropped to 25%.
The bar chart illustrates, the ratio of
men
, women and children who consumed five proportions of fruits and vegetables every day in these 8 years between 2001 and 2008 in the United Kingdom.

Overall
, it can be
see
that the highest percentage of all the
people
was women. While, the adolescents
constantly
remained the lowest proportion of eating healthy fruits and vegetables.

In 2001, ladies have eaten 22% of the vegetables and fruits. After
next
five years (2006) the figure of the females have increased and reached to peak level which was round about 35 percent.

Males and
teenagers
, the percentage remained stable in 2001, 2002 and 2003. For the
first
three years the adult’s ratio was approximately 13% while the young age
people
were about 18%. Male consumption raised in 2006 to 28% and it
also
remained stable in 2007
but
in 2008 it
showed
a minor decrease which was almost 27%. Meanwhile, the growth of figure in children
also
inclined and reached to 25% in 2007
but
after following
year
it dropped to 25%.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five proportions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008 v. 2

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