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The map below show a book store in 2000 and now Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The map below show a book store in 2000 and now
The two maps illustrate a book store' s different structures in 2000 and now. In general, it can be seen that the book store has organised differently to adopt the new trend of combination of book and coffee shop. Particularly, the fiction area in the left of the book store, counted from the entrance in 2000 has been divided into four categories, art, hobbies, cookery and fiction at the present. Also, the fiction area next to that line changed into non-fiction. Directly from the entrance, there used to be three sections including art, hobbies, cookery, but now, there are only three coffee tables. The tables are placed nearly at the centre of the book store, which is convenient for the bookworms to sit down and enjoy the books. Opposite to those tables, a coffee bar is also installed instead of the non fiction section. Despite the change mentioned above, there still some remains the same. For example, the service desk still places at the right corner next to the entrance, just like in 2000, whereas the line of the new books, which is near the service desk, is just behind the entrance.
The two maps illustrate a
book
store&
#039; s
different
structures in 2000 and
now
.

In general
, it can be
seen
that the
book
store
has
organised
differently
to adopt the new trend of combination of
book
and coffee shop.

Particularly
, the
fiction
area in the
left
of the
book
store
, counted from the
entrance
in 2000 has
been divided
into four categories, art, hobbies, cookery and
fiction
at the present.
Also
, the
fiction
area
next
to that line
changed
into non-fiction.
Directly
from the
entrance
, there
used
to be three sections including art, hobbies, cookery,
but
now
, there are
only
three coffee tables. The tables
are placed
nearly
at the
centre
of the
book
store
, which is convenient for the bookworms to sit down and enjoy the
books
. Opposite to those tables, a coffee bar is
also
installed
instead
of the non
fiction
section.

Despite the
change
mentioned above, there
still
some
remains the same.
For example
, the service desk
still
places at the right corner
next
to the
entrance
,
just
like in 2000, whereas the line of the new
books
, which is near the service desk, is
just
behind the
entrance
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS academic The map below show a book store in 2000 and now

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
192 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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