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the chart below shows the highest educational degree earned by King City residents and the average household size in King City from 1950 - 2000 v.2

the chart below shows the highest educational degree earned by King City residents and the average household size in King City from 1950 - 2000 v. 2
The charts illustrate the highest institutional degree completed by the residents of King City and the average number of people living in a home, from the year 1950 to 2000. Overall, the diagram shows an increase in the number of college and post-graduate degrees, while the percentage of high school and no high school degrees has gone down. The average household size is also dropping by time. There is a drastic increase of 39% in the number of college degrees from 1950 to 2000 and a gradual increase of 11 percent in post-graduate degrees. However, high school degrees see a sharp decline of 35 % in the number, and there is a slight decrease in no high school degree number. The average household size has gone down from 3. 2 to 2. 5 in the 50 years. There is a direct relation seen between the high school degree and average household size. As the size decreases, the number of high school degree also decreases. On the other hand, the college degree has an inverse proportion with the average household number.
The charts illustrate the highest institutional
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degree
completed by the residents of King City and the
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average
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number
of
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people
living in a home, from the year 1950 to 2000.

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, the diagram
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shows
an increase in the
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number
of college and post-graduate
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degrees
, while the percentage of
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high
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school
and no
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high
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school
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degrees
has gone down. The
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average
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household
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size
is
also
dropping by time.

There is a drastic increase of 39% in the
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number
of college
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degrees
from 1950 to 2000 and a gradual increase of 11 percent in post-graduate
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degrees
.
However
,
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high
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school
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degrees
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see
a sharp decline of 35 % in the
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number
, and there is a slight decrease in no
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high
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school
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degree
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number
. The
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average
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household
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size
has gone down from 3. 2 to 2. 5 in the 50 years.

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seen
between the
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high
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school
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degree
and
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average
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household
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size
. As the
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size
decreases, the
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number
of
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high
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school
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degree
also
decreases.
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, the college
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degree
has an inverse proportion with the
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average
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household
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number
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
42Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic the chart below shows the highest educational degree earned by King City residents and the average household size in King City from 1950 - 2000 v. 2

Academic
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4 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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