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The chart below shows the Higher Colleges of Technology graduates in the UAE. v.1

The chart below shows the Higher Colleges of Technology graduates in the UAE. v. 1
The bar chart compares the number of students who were awarded honours from different colleges under the Higher Colleges of Technology. The graduates are categorized by the colleges they received their graduation from and based on their gender. Overall, more women finished their graduation courses than that of males. As is suggested in the illustration, roughly 2500 pupils achieved graduation degree from the HTC colleges and among them over 1400 were females. Dubai college awarded degrees to the highest number of students and among them around 550 were females and 430 were males. The second most number of graduates were from Abu Dhabi college and 273 male students were awarded degrees compare to 293 female students. It is quite striking to observe that female graduates outnumbered male students in all colleges in terms of achieving the degree bestowed by the educational institutes. The number of students who earned their graduations from Al Ain, Sharjah and Ras Al Khaimah colleges was somewhat similar, ranging from 250 to 350 and more than 60% of those graduates were females.
The bar chart compares the
number
of
students
who
were awarded
honours
from
different
colleges under the Higher Colleges of Technology. The
graduates
are categorized
by the colleges they received their
graduation
from and based on their gender.
Overall
, more women finished their
graduation
courses than that of males.

As
is suggested
in the illustration, roughly 2500 pupils achieved
graduation
degree
from the
HTC
colleges and among them over 1400 were
females
.
Dubai college
awarded
degrees
to the highest
number
of
students
and among them around 550 were
females
and 430 were males. The second most
number
of
graduates
were from Abu Dhabi college and 273 male
students
were awarded
degrees
compare to 293
female
students
. It is quite striking to observe that
female
graduates
outnumbered male
students
in all colleges in terms of achieving the
degree
bestowed by the educational institutes. The
number
of
students
who earned their
graduations
from Al Ain,
Sharjah
and
Ras
Al
Khaimah
colleges was somewhat similar, ranging from 250 to 350 and more than 60% of those
graduates
were
females
.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS academic The chart below shows the Higher Colleges of Technology graduates in the UAE. v. 1

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