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The chart below shows the different types of goods and services purchased online in Australia, Canada and the United Kingdom in one year. v.2

The chart below shows the different types of goods and services purchased online in Australia, Canada and the United Kingdom in one year. v. 2
The bar chart shows percentage of consumers purchasing item online in three different countries, which are Australia, Canada, and The United Kingdom. There are several items appears on the chart, such as music, computers, and books, which become the top three percentages of consumers purchasing item online. In addition, DVDs/Video, food and drink, Toys, and Financial Service items following the ranks. For several items, such as music, books, computer equipment, DVDs/Video, and food and drink, amount of consumers whose come from the United Kingdom bigger than Australia and Canada. Especially on music, they reach about 68% point, following by books which reach amount 65%. Online Consumers of The United Kingdom only beaten by two items, which by Financial Services and toys. Australian online consumers always on third or second places. They never beat The United Kingdom online consumers, unless on one item, financial service, which they can reach 18%. In other hands, The United Kingdom consumers only reach 1%, and Canadian just 12%. Overall, the United Kingdom consumers purchasing items by online system.
The bar chart
shows
percentage of
consumers
purchasing
item
online
in three
different
countries, which are Australia, Canada, and The
United
Kingdom. There are several
items
appears on the chart, such as music, computers, and books, which become the top three percentages of
consumers
purchasing
item
online
.
In addition
, DVDs/Video, food and drink, Toys, and Financial Service
items
following the ranks.

For several
items
, such as music, books, computer equipment, DVDs/Video, and food and drink, amount of
consumers
whose
come
from the
United
Kingdom bigger than Australia and Canada.
Especially
on music, they
reach
about 68% point, following by books which
reach
amount 65%.
Online
Consumers
of The
United
Kingdom
only
beaten by two
items
, which by Financial Services and toys.

Australian
online
consumers
always on third or second places. They never beat The
United
Kingdom
online
consumers
, unless on one
item
, financial service, which they can
reach
18%. In other hands, The
United
Kingdom
consumers
only
reach
1%, and Canadian
just
12%.
Overall
, the
United
Kingdom
consumers
purchasing
items
by
online
system.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the different types of goods and services purchased online in Australia, Canada and the United Kingdom in one year. v. 2

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