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The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. v.3

The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. v. 3
The illustration compares the post-school qualifications of Australian male and female in 1999. As is observed, more female's highest educational qualification was undergraduate diploma and bachelor degree while male outnumbered female in higher qualification levels and skilled education. According to the chart, almost 90% of males had a skilled vocational diploma, while only approximately 10% of females had the same qualifications. Nearly 70% of women's highest qualification was an undergraduate diploma, and this ratio is more than twice than that of males. In terms of males and females whose highest education was a bachelor degree, females were slightly ahead of male with a ratio of 50%. But if we consider the females and males who had obtained post-graduation degrees, males were well ahead of females. 70% of post-graduate diplomas were completed by males and 60% master's degree was completed by females. On the contrary, only 30% of women finished a post-graduate diploma and four out of ten master's degree holders were females.
The illustration compares the post-school
qualifications
of Australian male and
female
in 1999. As
is observed
, more
female's
highest educational
qualification
was undergraduate
diploma
and bachelor
degree
while male outnumbered
female
in higher
qualification
levels and skilled education.

According to the chart, almost 90% of
males
had a skilled vocational
diploma
, while
only
approximately 10% of
females
had the same
qualifications
.
Nearly
70% of women's highest
qualification
was an undergraduate
diploma
, and this ratio is more than twice than that of
males
. In terms of
males
and
females
whose highest education was a bachelor
degree
,
females
were
slightly
ahead of male with a ratio of 50%.
But
if we consider the
females
and
males
who had obtained post-graduation
degrees
,
males
were well ahead of
females
. 70% of post-graduate
diplomas
were completed
by
males
and 60% master's
degree
was completed
by
females
.
On the contrary
,
only
30% of women finished a post-graduate
diploma
and four out of ten
master's
degree
holders were
females
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. v. 3

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