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The chart below, shows the amount of money per spent on fast foods in britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent. v.2

The chart below, shows the amount of money per spent on fast foods in britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
A glance at the bar chart provided reveals how much money spent on week for different fast foods in UK during the period from 1970 to 1990. Overall, what stands out from chart is that hamburgers were the most popular fast food among highincome earners than other products. Another interesting point is that hamburger and fish trend were similat to each other. Looking at the details, as regards bar chart hamburgers with 70 were twice as popular as fish with 25 among high income people while pizza was the least popular food with above 20. By contrast, among average income earners fish with 45 were a bit less popular than hamburgers whereas pizza accounted for 25 percent. Meanwhile, fish were the popular food among low income people with aroud 25 percent while hamburgers numbered a just 20 percent. Pizza accounted for 15 percent, which made it the least opted food. Secondly, according to graph, in 1970 fish trend started at approximately 15 then rose gradually to 500 until 1990 while hamburger increased from above 7 experienced slightly rise to 100 next 15 year before rocketing to 300 in 1990. Next pizza witnessed steady decline from 300 to 200 over 10 year then saw a bit rise just 204 in 1990.
A glance at the bar chart provided reveals how much money spent on week for
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in UK during the period from 1970 to 1990.
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popular
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fast
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food
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earners than other products. Another interesting point is that hamburger and fish trend were
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details
, as regards bar chart hamburgers with 70 were twice as
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as fish with 25 among high income
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people
while pizza was the least
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popular
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food
with above 20. By contrast, among average income earners fish with 45 were a bit less
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popular
than hamburgers whereas pizza accounted for 25
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. Meanwhile, fish were the
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popular
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food
among low income
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people
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aroud
25
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while hamburgers numbered a
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20
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. Pizza accounted for 15
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, which made it the least opted food.

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, according to graph, in 1970 fish trend
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rocketing to 300 in 1990.
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204 in 1990.
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IELTS academic The chart below, shows the amount of money per spent on fast foods in britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.

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3 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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