The bar graph illustrates the duration of free time enjoyed by male and female with various professional status in a typical week in 1998-99. At the first glance, it is clear that jobless and pensioner people had a longer idle time to enjoy and men enjoyed more leisure hours than women.
As it is presented in the diagram, full-time employed people had fewer leisure hours than people with other professional states. Male who worked from 9 to 5, had approximately 43 hours of free time per week whereas, females had roughly 38 hours spare time to relish. No data was given for the part-time employed men, meanwhile, women with this working status had exactly 40 hours to appreciate during the week. On top of that, housewives had 10 more free hours than the part-time employed females in a week.
It is crystal clear that the highest spare hours were available to those who didn’t work or who retired from their jobs. It is worth noticing that, men regardless of employment scenario, had more hours to kill than that of females.
The bar graph illustrates the duration of free
time
enjoyed by male and
female
with various professional status in a typical week in 1998-99. At the
first
glance, it is
clear
that jobless and pensioner
people
had a longer idle
time
to enjoy and
men
enjoyed more leisure
hours
than women.
As it
is presented
in the diagram, full-time employed
people
had fewer leisure
hours
than
people
with other professional states. Male who worked from 9 to 5, had approximately 43
hours
of free
time
per week whereas,
females
had roughly 38
hours
spare
time
to relish. No data was
given
for the part-time employed
men
, meanwhile, women with this working status had exactly 40
hours
to appreciate during the week.
On top of that
, housewives had 10 more free
hours
than the part-time employed
females
in a week.
It is crystal
clear
that the highest spare
hours
were available to those who didn’t work or who retired from their jobs. It is worth noticing that,
men
regardless of employment scenario, had more
hours
to kill than that of
females
.
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16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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