The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. v.6
The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. v. 6
The provided graph presents data on the amount of spare time both Males and Females from different employment status had enjoyed. The data available represents samples from the year 1998- 1999 and number of hours each gender spent on leisure.
Firstly, it is seen that both genders from ‘Unemployed’ and ‘Retired’ status enjoyed more leisure time (75-85 hours) than all other employment nature. This is perhaps due to the ample time they had to spend on leisure instead of work hours.
Secondly, it is observed that data for men employed part-time and men who stayed at home is not provided in the chart. Also, part-time employed females enjoyed fewer leisure hours (40 hours) than housewives (50hours) but slightly more than females with full-time jobs (35-39 hours).
In conclusion, unemployed and retired categories of both genders enjoyed more leisure hours. However, in all the categories, males enjoyed more free hours than females did. No data was given for leisure time enjoyed by men who stayed home and men who worked part-time.
The provided graph presents
data
on the amount of spare
time
both Males and
Females
from
different
employment status had
enjoyed
. The
data
available represents samples from the year
1998- 1999
and number of
hours
each gender spent on leisure.
Firstly
, it is
seen
that both genders from ‘Unemployed’ and ‘Retired’ status
enjoyed
more
leisure
time
(75-85
hours)
than all other employment nature. This is perhaps due to the ample
time
they had to spend on
leisure
instead
of work hours.
Secondly
, it
is observed
that
data
for
men
employed part-time and
men
who stayed at home is not provided in the chart.
Also
, part-time employed
females
enjoyed
fewer
leisure
hours
(40
hours)
than housewives
(50hours)
but
slightly
more than
females
with full-time jobs (35-39 hours).
In conclusion
, unemployed and retired categories of both genders
enjoyed
more
leisure
hours
.
However
, in all the categories, males
enjoyed
more free
hours
than
females
did. No
data
was
given
for
leisure
time
enjoyed
by
men
who stayed home and
men
who worked part-time.
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