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The chart below show the percentage of of five kinds of book sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The chart below show the percentage of of five kinds of book sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012
The given pie charts compare the popularity of five different sort of books according to the sales of a bookseller during the period of 1972 to 2012. Overall, the popularity of adult fiction book was escalated over the given period whereas, biography was performed the worst as per sales by seller from 1972 to 2012. In 1972, other type of books were the highest purchased by readers, which account for a quarter, while books based on travelling were the least popular (15%) among all type of books. Other three type of books namely - adult fiction, children' s fiction and biography books shared an equal proportion at two-fifth. In 1992, sales of biography and other books were decreased marginally by 5% and reached at 15% and 20% respectively. Adult fiction books, in contrast, witnessed an opposite trend and raised by 5%. However, the rate for travelling books and children' s fiction books were approximately two-fifth. In 2012, fiction books for adults and children covered the significant proportion, which constituted 45% and 25% respectively. Whereas, remaining books sold in minority fraction, made up at nearly one in ten percentage.
The
given
pie charts compare the popularity of five
different
sort
of
books
according to the sales of a bookseller during the period of 1972 to 2012.

Overall
, the popularity of adult
fiction
book
was escalated
over the
given
period whereas, biography
was performed
the worst as per sales by seller from 1972 to 2012.

In 1972, other type of
books
were the highest
purchased
by readers, which account for a quarter, while
books
based on travelling were the least popular (15%) among all type of
books
. Other three type of
books
namely
-
adult
fiction
,
children&
#039; s
fiction
and biography
books
shared an equal proportion at two-fifth.

In 1992, sales of biography and other
books
were decreased
marginally
by 5% and reached at 15% and 20%
respectively
. Adult
fiction
books
,
in contrast
, witnessed an opposite trend and raised by 5%.
However
, the rate for travelling
books
and
children&
#039; s
fiction
books
were approximately two-fifth.

In 2012,
fiction
books
for
adults
and children covered the significant proportion, which constituted 45% and 25%
respectively
. Whereas, remaining
books
sold in minority fraction, made up at
nearly
one in ten percentage.
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IELTS academic The chart below show the percentage of of five kinds of book sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012

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