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The maps below show the changes that have been taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton a neighbouring town since 1962 v.2

The maps below show the changes that have been taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton a neighbouring town since 1962 v. 2
The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton which is a neighboring town, over three periods (1962, 1985, and the present). Overall, Meadowside village enlarges size and become Meodowside suburb connected to Fonton. In addition, there are a significant alteration in terms of amenities, infrastructure, and accommodation during the period. In 1962, there was only a completely area with no roads and rail crossing between Meadowside and Fonton –in the east of Meadowside village. Interestingly, not only did Meadowside village has the small road placed from the west to the northern Meadowside, there was also a rail line running through Fonton from eastern to the north-west of Fonton. Subsequently, in 1985, both village experienced a considerable enlargement in their areas’ size. Therefore, the small road in Meadowside transformed to the main road and also extended to the east connecting to Fonton. while housing estate and leisure complex were constructed in the western and the eastern village each, supermarket had been built in the southern village. Currently, Meadowside village –now a suburb– and Fonton are integrated. There were new business park, hotel and station positioned in the centre of those areas. The former constructed in the southern area although the two latter built in the northern area. Lastly, railway line has been elongated to the west associated with station.
The map
shows
the development of
Meadowside
village
and
Fonton
which is a neighboring town, over three periods (1962, 1985, and the present).
Overall
,
Meadowside
village
enlarges size and become
Meodowside
suburb connected to
Fonton
.
In addition
, there are a significant alteration in terms of amenities, infrastructure, and accommodation during the period.

In 1962, there was
only
a completely
area
with no
roads
and rail crossing between
Meadowside
and
Fonton
–in the east of
Meadowside
village
.
Interestingly
, not
only
did
Meadowside
village
has the
small
road
placed from the west to the northern
Meadowside
, there was
also
a rail line running through
Fonton
from eastern to the north-west of
Fonton
.

Subsequently
, in 1985, both
village
experienced a considerable enlargement in their
areas’
size.
Therefore
, the
small
road
in
Meadowside
transformed to the main
road
and
also
extended to the east connecting to
Fonton
.
while
housing estate and leisure complex
were constructed
in the western and the eastern
village
each, supermarket had
been built
in the southern village.

Currently
,
Meadowside
village
now
a suburb– and
Fonton
are integrated
. There were new business park, hotel and station positioned in the
centre
of those
areas
. The former constructed in the southern
area
although the two latter built in the northern
area
.
Lastly
, railway line has
been elongated
to the west associated with station.
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