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The chart below show how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. v.2

The chart below show how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. v. 2
The bar chart compares frequency of eating out at fast food restuarants among the USA people over the 10-year period from 2003 to 2013. Overall, it is clear that the majority number of people in the United State go to fast food restaurants once a week or once or twice a month in the 10 years period. Besides, going to fast food restuarants everyday or never are rare cases. In the year 2003, around 31% and 30% of population in the USA went to fast food restaurants once a week and once or twice a month respectively, which were the two most hightest percentages. The frequency of having fast food once a week rose to about 33% and then went down to around 27%, while once or twice a month dropped by 5% in 2006 and then took the highest ratio at 33%. On the other hand, approximately 17% of people in the USA ate out at fast food restaurants several times a week, following 3 years 5% more people ate out more, about 4% dropped eventually in 2013. Nearly 13% of the US people ate fast food, the ratio grew up to 15% in 2006 and it stayed till 2013. The percentage of eople who never eat out at fast food or eat out everyday were under 5% all the time during the whole period.
The bar chart compares frequency of eating out at
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restuarants
among the USA
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people
over the
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10-year
period from 2003 to 2013.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the majority number of
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people
in the United State go to
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fast
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food
restaurants
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once
a
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week
or
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once
or twice a month in the 10 years period.
Besides
, going to
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food
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restuarants
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everyday
or never are rare cases.

In the
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year
2003, around 31% and 30% of population in the USA went to
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fast
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food
restaurants
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once
a
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week
and
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once
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respectively
, which were the two most
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hightest
percentages. The frequency of having
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fast
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food
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once
a
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week
rose to about 33% and then went down to around 27%, while
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or twice a month dropped by 5% in 2006 and then took the highest ratio at 33%.

On the other hand
, approximately 17% of
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people
in the USA
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ate
out at
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fast
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food
restaurants several times a
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week
, following 3 years 5% more
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people
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ate
out more, about 4% dropped
eventually
in 2013.
Nearly
13% of the US
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people
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, the ratio grew up to 15% in 2006 and it stayed till 2013. The percentage of
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eople
who never eat out at
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food
or eat out
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everyday
were under 5% all the time during the whole period.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS academic The chart below show how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. v. 2

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  American English
4 paragraphs
226 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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