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The charls below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
The pie charts below illustrate three types of nutreans devided in to average percentages that have in each meal in USA, which harms your health if taken too much. Overall, according to the charts, people use to have sodium and saturated fats rich dinner in USA while half of the nutrian percentage in lunch and one third of them in Breakfast. Mostly the highest consumption in Sodium and fats are 43% and 37%, which is in dinner, although the most of the added sugars are in snaks which is 42 percent. Meanwhile, the breakfast seems balanced of all three nutreans and it is mostly similar to each other in percentage. Furthermore, the lowest percentage of sodium reported in snaks, comparing to the dinner that is 14%. in summary, it’s clear that according to the charts, breakfast is the healthiest meal in the day consuming less percentage of all three nutriens, but dinner and snaks are the unhealthiest.
The pie charts below illustrate three types of
nutreans
devided
in to average
percentages
that have in each meal
in USA
, which harms your health if taken too much.

Overall
, according to the charts,
people
use to
have sodium and saturated fats rich
dinner
in USA
while half of the
nutrian
percentage
in lunch and one third of them in Breakfast.

Mostly
the highest consumption in Sodium and fats are 43% and 37%, which is in
dinner
, although the most of the
added
sugars are in
snaks
which is 42 percent. Meanwhile, the breakfast seems balanced of all three
nutreans
and it is
mostly
similar to each other in
percentage
.
Furthermore
, the lowest
percentage
of sodium reported in
snaks
, comparing to the
dinner
that is
14%.
in
summary, it’s
clear
that according to the charts, breakfast is the healthiest meal in the day consuming less
percentage
of all three
nutriens
,
but
dinner
and
snaks
are the unhealthiest.
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IELTS academic The charls below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

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