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The chat below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The chat below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
A glance at three pie charts provided reveal some interesting information about the amount of three types of nutrients that are consumed in specific meals in the USA. It' s evident that each nutrient has been eaten too much at least one meal per day, and this is likely to be not good for health. Sodium and Saturated Fat have the tendency of average percentages quite similar, with the highest one is dinner, it is 43 percent for Sodium and 37 percent for Saturated fat. This is following by Lunch, sodium takes 29 percent and Saturated fat takes 26 percent. Dinner and Snacks seem not eat those types of nutrions too much - Sodium uses 14 percent for both, and Saturated fat with 21% for dinner and 16% for snacks. By stark contrast, the Added sugar is different from Sodium and Saturated Fat, the meal has using it the most is Snacks, with the percentage is 42 percent. Next is Dinner - 23%, and Lunch is just 19%. The lowest one belongs to Breakfast - a mere of 16 percent. Overall, those charts show that the Americans should consider eating too much Sodium and Saturated Fat at Dinner and Added Sugar at Snacks to take care of their health
A glance at three pie charts provided reveal
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interesting information about the amount of three types of nutrients that
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in specific meals in the USA.
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been eaten
too much at least one meal per day, and this is likely to be not
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good
for health.

Sodium and
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Saturated
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Fat
have the tendency of average percentages quite similar, with the highest one is
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dinner
, it is 43
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percent
for Sodium and 37
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percent
for
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Saturated
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fat
. This is following by Lunch, sodium takes 29
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percent
and
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Saturated
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fat
takes 26
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percent
.
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Dinner
and Snacks seem not eat those types of
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nutrions
too much
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Sodium
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uses
14
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percent
for both, and
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Saturated
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fat
with 21% for
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dinner
and 16% for snacks.

By stark contrast, the
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Added
sugar is
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different
from Sodium and
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Saturated
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Fat
, the meal has using it the most is Snacks, with the percentage is 42
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percent
.
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is
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Dinner
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23%, and Lunch is
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just
19%. The lowest one belongs to Breakfast
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a mere of 16 percent.

Overall
, those charts
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show
that the Americans should consider eating too much Sodium and
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Saturated
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Fat
at
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Dinner
and
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Added
Sugar at Snacks to take care of their health
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23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic The chat below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
208 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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