The bar chart describes about the total amount of phone calls that used by British civilization over 7 year. This informations represent 3 different type of phones.
It is obvious that Loacl-Fixed line was the famous type in UK throughout several years. However, mobiles calls wa the least popular compared the others.
In 1995, UK people used local fixed line for more than 70 billions minutes and it started the highest usage between mobile phone an other fixed line. After a couple years, 3 different types rose gradually until 1999. In addition, local fixed line reached the maximum spent for 90 billion minutes in 1999.
From 2000 to 2002 the 2 other less popular types (national and international fixed line and mobiles) trend were increasing when the local fixed line usage was gradually declining. At the end, mobiles calls was the most interesting type because it reached the biggest movement after 1999.
The bar chart
describes
about the total amount of phone calls that
used
by British civilization over 7 year.
This
informations
represent 3
different
type
of phones.
It is obvious that Loacl-
Fixed
line
was the
famous
type
in UK throughout several years.
However
, mobiles calls
wa
the least popular compared the others.
In 1995, UK
people
used
local
fixed
line
for more than 70 billions minutes and it
started
the highest usage between mobile phone
an other
fixed
line
. After a
couple
years, 3
different
types
rose
gradually
until 1999.
In addition
, local
fixed
line
reached the maximum spent for 90 billion minutes in 1999.
From 2000 to 2002 the 2 other less popular
types
(national and international
fixed
line
and mobiles) trend were increasing when the local
fixed
line
usage was
gradually
declining. At the
end
, mobiles calls was the most interesting
type
because
it reached the biggest movement after 1999.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes