The bar graph represents the millions of British people who are an active member of private occupational pension schemes from 2007 to 2014.
Overall, the number of pension scheme received for defined benefits reduced whereas the defined contribution number had increased. It is interesting to note that, the latter two consecutive years showed a drastic incremental trend.
In terms of defined benefits recorded at the highest of nearly 3 million British people for the memberships and this rate eventually dropped constantly and slowly until it reached at about 1. 5 million membership numbers in 2012. From 2013 to 2014, the number of membership remained unchanged at about 1. 3 million memberships for defined benefits.
In contrast to this declining trend, defined contribution had an incremental trend with active memberships. To begin with, this application had the lowest number of active members of nearly 1 million British people had assigned which grew slowly but always stayed at near to 1 million memberships. This continued to 2013 where the contribution membership rose to about 1. 5 million memberships and this number skyrocketed to over 3 million memberships by 2014.
The bar graph represents the
millions
of British
people
who are an active member of private occupational pension schemes from 2007 to 2014.
Overall
, the
number
of pension scheme received for
defined
benefits
reduced
whereas the
defined
contribution
number
had increased. It is interesting to note that, the latter two consecutive years
showed
a drastic incremental trend.
In terms of
defined
benefits recorded at the highest of
nearly
3
million
British
people
for the
memberships
and this rate
eventually
dropped
constantly
and
slowly
until it reached at about 1. 5
million
membership
numbers
in 2012. From 2013 to 2014, the
number
of
membership
remained unchanged at about 1. 3
million
memberships
for
defined
benefits.
In contrast
to this declining trend,
defined
contribution had an incremental trend with active
memberships
. To
begin
with, this application had the lowest
number
of active members of
nearly
1
million
British
people
had assigned which grew
slowly
but
always stayed at near to 1
million
memberships
. This continued to 2013 where the contribution
membership
rose to about 1. 5
million
memberships
and this
number
skyrocketed to over 3
million
memberships
by 2014.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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