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The bat chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information v.2

The bat chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information v. 2
The bar chart provides the information about the vehicle ownership for a period of 12 years between 1987 and 1999. If we look at the graph, we can clearly see that, vehicle ownership has increased substantially over the 12 years between 1987 and 1999. In 1987, the number of vehicles per thousand people in china was extremely low with just 250, but after then it increased gradually and reached around 900 in 1991. Between 1991 and 1993, the increase in vehicle ownership was just marginal with around 100. However, from 1993 on-wards, the trend of vehicle ownership soared up unexpectedly and reached dramatic figures of 2000 in 1995, 3000 in 1997 and over 4000 in 1999. In overall, it can be deduced from the graph that the popularity of vehicle ownership in china is phenomenal in the latest years, although it was not so remarkable in the early years between 1987 and 1993.
The bar chart provides the information about the
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for a period of 12 years between 1987 and 1999.

If we look at the graph, we can
clearly
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see
that,
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vehicle
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ownership
has increased
substantially
over the 12 years between 1987 and 1999. In 1987, the number of
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vehicles
per thousand
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people
in
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china
was
extremely
low with
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just
250,
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but
after then it increased
gradually
and reached around 900 in 1991. Between 1991 and 1993, the increase in
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vehicle
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ownership
was
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just
marginal with around 100.
However
, from 1993 on-wards, the trend of
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vehicle
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ownership
soared up
unexpectedly
and reached dramatic figures of 2000 in 1995, 3000 in 1997 and over 4000 in 1999.

In
overall
, it can
be deduced
from the graph that the popularity of
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vehicle
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ownership
in
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china
is phenomenal in the latest years, although it was not
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so
remarkable in the early years between 1987 and 1993.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS academic The bat chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information v. 2

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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