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The table below shows the result of a survey in which people of different age group were asked about their favorite TV program Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The table below shows the result of a survey in which people of different age group were asked about their favorite TV program
The table illustrates an overview concerning the information about the outcomes of a survey focusing on the preferable TV program of people from numerous age groups. Overall, it can be seen that news program was equally preferable to the age group of 16-20 as well as 21-25. In the group of 11-15, the proportion of people who enjoy watching cartoon was the highest, whereas it was the lowest for news program and the figures were 29% and 6% accordingly. In the same group, the proportion of people who watch feature films was 18% which was 2% lower than that of TV dramas. On the other hand in the age group of 16-20, the proportion of people who watch cartoons and the news program was the same with 21%. In the age group of 21-25, the most significant proportion of people enjoy watching news whereas cartoons seamed the least popular TV program and the figures were 21% and 4% successively. While watching TV dramas was equally preferable to the age group of 11-15 and 16-20 with 20% popularity, it was 6% less popular in the age group of 21-25.
The table illustrates an overview concerning the information about the outcomes of a survey focusing on the preferable TV
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who enjoy watching cartoon was the highest, whereas it was the lowest for
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news
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feature films was 18% which was 2% lower than that of TV dramas.
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age
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was the same with 21%.

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whereas cartoons seamed the least popular TV
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and the figures were 21% and 4%
successively
. While watching TV dramas was
equally
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age
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of 11-15 and 16-20 with 20% popularity, it was 6% less popular in the
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6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The table below shows the result of a survey in which people of different age group were asked about their favorite TV program

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
188 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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