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The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the v.1

The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the v. 1
The bar chart gives information about how jeans will be sole by two brands next year in turkey and the pie chart predicts the percentage of each company will be at the end of that period. At first glance, it is clear that jack & Jones' s sales will be higher than mango' s in every month except July and August. Meanwhile, others' projected market share is expected to be the largest one among all. Looking first at mango company, its sole jeans in turkey will witness an upward trend throughout next year, which starts at 100 thousand in January then it will end with about 900 thousand. Moreover, this figure is estimated to raise rapidly and then more gradual in the second half of the next year. In terms of the pie chart, it shows that mango will take exactly one-fifth of the total projected market share. Similarly, jack & Jones company are willing to have a climb at the same period as mango. However, its figure will drop dramatically in February but then predicts to go up slightly in the following months with a mild fluctuation. Despite a higher proportion than mango' s, jack & Jones' s number will still be lower than others' figure which can reach to 50% in the next year.
The bar chart gives information about how jeans will be sole by two brands
next
year
in
turkey
and the pie chart predicts the percentage of each
company
will be at the
end
of that period.

At
first
glance, it is
clear
that jack
&amp
;
Jones&
#039; s sales will be higher than
mango&
#039; s in every month except July and August. Meanwhile,
others&
#039; projected market share is
expected
to be the largest one among all.

Looking
first
at mango
company
, its sole jeans in
turkey
will witness an upward trend throughout
next
year
, which
starts
at 100 thousand in January then it will
end
with about 900 thousand.
Moreover
, this figure
is estimated
to raise
rapidly
and then more gradual in the second half of the
next
year
. In terms of the pie chart, it
shows
that mango will take exactly one-fifth of the total projected market share.

Similarly
, jack
&amp
; Jones
company
are willing to have a climb at the same period as mango.
However
, its figure will drop
dramatically
in February
but
then predicts to go up
slightly
in the following months with a mild fluctuation. Despite a higher proportion than
mango&
#039; s, jack
&amp
;
Jones&
#039; s number will
still
be lower than
others&
#039; figure which can reach to 50% in the
next
year
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the v. 1

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4 paragraphs
216 words
6.0
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