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The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six subjects at a US university in 2011. v.3

The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six subjects at a US university in 2011. v. 3
The provided chart compares the numbers of male and female enrollees in the research study in six subjects (linguistic, psychology, natural science, engineering programming and mathematics) at a US University. Overall, there were more male students enrolled in the field of research than female students. According to the given illustration, both male and female students have an equal number of enrollees in natural science. In mathematics, male students showed greater interest than female students. Furthermore, male enrollees in all the subjects except in linguistics. It is evident from the given data that natural science was the most sought subject for both male and female students as they recorded 400 enrollees altogether (200 on each group). In mathematics, male recorded another 200 enrollees as opposed to only about 50 female students. In addition, in psychology, there were about 375 enrollees, male students still dominated at 200 and 175 for their female counterpart. On the contrary, linguistic showed a different story as female students toppled the number of male students at around 120 and 80 respectively.
The provided chart compares the numbers of male and
female
enrollees
in the research study in six subjects (linguistic, psychology, natural science, engineering programming and mathematics) at a US University.
Overall
, there were more male
students
enrolled in the field of research than
female
students.

According to the
given
illustration, both male and
female
students
have an equal number of
enrollees
in natural science. In mathematics, male
students
showed
greater interest than
female
students
.
Furthermore
, male
enrollees
in all the subjects except in linguistics. It is evident from the
given
data that natural science was the most sought subject for both male and
female
students
as they recorded 400
enrollees
altogether (200 on each group). In mathematics, male recorded another 200
enrollees
as opposed to
only
about 50
female
students
.
In addition
, in psychology, there were about 375
enrollees
, male
students
still
dominated at 200 and 175 for their
female
counterpart.
On the contrary
, linguistic
showed
a
different
story as
female
students
toppled the number of male
students
at around 120 and 80
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six subjects at a US university in 2011. v. 3

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174 words
5.5
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