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The bar graph below shows the number of male and female research students studying six subjects at a US university in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and report in th main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The bar graph below shows the number of male and female research students studying six subjects at a US university in 2011.
A glance at the bar chart given compares the proportion of students of both genders working on the research projects for six academic subjects. Generally speaking, more men than females studied on the above mentioned researches with some exceptions. Of the 6 subjects, male students dominated the research on 3 subjects (Mathematics, Programming and Engineering). The most significant students’ gender imbalance recorded in this chart was Mathematics, in which male students outnumbered females almost 5 to 1. Engineering and Programming, although with 50 less boys’ participation when compared to Maths, still leaded by males. Numbering at 150, count of male students of both subjects was twofold larger than females’. Moreover, it is interesting to note that there were subjects having number of girl students slightly exceeded boys’ - Linguistic. While around 110 girls students worked on this subject, 30 less boys, which equalled to 80, enrolled. Lastly, as for the remaining 2 subjects, Natural Science and Psychology, enrollment of students from both genders was comparable (about 200).
A glance at the bar chart
given
compares the proportion of
students
of both genders working on the research projects for six academic
subjects
.
Generally
speaking, more
men
than females studied on the above mentioned researches with
some
exceptions.

Of the 6
subjects
, male
students
dominated the research on 3
subjects
(Mathematics, Programming and Engineering). The most significant
students’
gender imbalance recorded in this chart was Mathematics, in which male
students
outnumbered females almost 5 to 1. Engineering and Programming, although with 50
less
boys’ participation when compared to
Maths
,
still
leaded by
males
. Numbering at 150, count of male
students
of both
subjects
was twofold larger than females’.

Moreover
, it is interesting to note that there were
subjects
having number of girl
students
slightly
exceeded boys’
-
Linguistic. While around 110 girls
students
worked on this
subject
, 30
less
boys, which equalled to 80, enrolled.
Lastly
, as for the remaining 2
subjects
, Natural Science and Psychology, enrollment of
students
from both genders was comparable (about 200).
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS academic The bar graph below shows the number of male and female research students studying six subjects at a US university in 2011.

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167 words
6.0
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