The line graph illustrates how the proportion of unemployment of people aged between 16 and 24 years in England changed in the period of 20 years from 1993 to 2012.
Overall, while the percentage of young adults who were jobless in England showed a fluctuating leapfrog, the overall rate of adults without job indicated a slight dip.
In 1993, level of joblessness in 16 to 24-year-old English living in London took the lead, with roughly 22%, which was 5% higher than that of those living in the rest of England. Both figures then experienced a significant decrease and reached their rock bottom at 15% and 11% in 2002 and 2004 respectively. However, they gathered pace and made a recovery to increase steadily in the remainder of the surveyed period. (It is noted that the proportion of young adults living in the capital was merely higher than that of dwellers living outside London).
In the year of 1993, the overall adult unemployment rate in London accounted for 14%, which was slightly higher than its counterpart-the rate in the rest of England, a difference of 4%. A striking similarity is that these figures then had a significant decrease in the 10 consecutive years and were below 10% at the end of the survey.
The line graph illustrates how the proportion of unemployment of
people
aged between 16 and 24 years in England
changed
in the period of 20 years from 1993 to 2012.
Overall
, while the percentage of young
adults
who were jobless in England
showed
a fluctuating leapfrog, the
overall
rate of
adults
without job indicated a slight dip.
In 1993, level of joblessness in 16 to 24-year-
old
English
living
in London took the lead, with roughly 22%, which was 5% higher than that of those
living
in the rest of England. Both figures then experienced a significant decrease and reached their rock bottom at 15% and 11% in 2002 and 2004
respectively
.
However
, they gathered pace and made a recovery to increase
steadily
in the remainder of the surveyed period. (It
is noted
that the proportion of young
adults
living
in the capital was
merely
higher than that of dwellers
living
outside London).
In the
year
of 1993, the
overall
adult unemployment rate in London accounted for 14%, which was
slightly
higher than its counterpart-the rate in the rest of England, a difference of 4%. A striking similarity is that these figures then had a significant decrease in the 10 consecutive years and were below 10% at the
end
of the survey.
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