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The bar charts shows co2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union and European Union funds being spent on different forms of transportation. v.2

The bar charts shows co2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union and European Union funds being spent on different forms of transportation. v. 2
The graph compare Co2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union and the pie charts illustrate forms of transportation. Overall as can be seen they is not correlation between Co2 bar chart and money spent pie chat, event both of them showing the same theme, which is transportation, but still they have not correlation. In the bar charts they got information that produce much or less co2 emission and when they see on pie charts, they can will see which transport infrastructure which got more attention from European union and than the answer is roads. In the graphs charts showed coaches is co2 emission a small percentage roughly 45%, then maritime and rail got percent precisely in 50%, while air transport the highest percentage rather than buses and passenger cars because the buses still in 70%, passenger cars in around 130% and then the air on 375% the amount is very significant between another co2 emissions. In the pie charts, the roads in dominate in finish cost in European union, the roads still in 53%, internet modal, inland waterway and airports a very small proportion only 1% and unknown, ports are slightly higher it on 2%, railways 31% and public transportation still in 10%.
The graph compare Co2 emissions for
different
forms of transport in the European Union and the
pie
charts
illustrate forms of transportation.
Overall
as can be
seen
they
is
not correlation between Co2 bar
chart
and money spent
pie
chat,
event
both of them showing the same theme, which is transportation,
but
still
they have not correlation. In the bar
charts
they
got
information that produce much or less co2 emission and when they
see
on
pie
charts
, they can will
see
which transport infrastructure which
got
more attention from
European union
and
than
the answer is roads.

In the graphs
charts
showed
coaches is co2 emission a
small
percentage roughly 45%, then maritime and rail
got
percent
precisely
in 50%, while air transport the highest percentage
rather
than buses and passenger cars
because
the buses
still
in 70%, passenger cars in around 130% and then the air on 375% the amount is
very
significant between another co2 emissions.

In
the
pie
charts
, the roads
in dominate in
finish cost in
European union
, the roads
still
in 53%, internet modal, inland waterway and airports a
very
small
proportion
only
1% and unknown, ports are
slightly
higher
it
on 2%, railways 31% and public transportation
still
in 10%.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS academic The bar charts shows co2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union and European Union funds being spent on different forms of transportation. v. 2

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