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The graph below shows CO<sub>2</sub> emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. v.1

The graph below shows CO<sub>2</sub> emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. v. 1
The bar chart summaries how much C02 is discharged for one-kilometre travel by a passenger in different transportations and the pie chart shows the ratio of European Union’s expenditure for a variety of transport systems. Generally speaking, air travel emits the highest amount of Carbon Dioxide and EU spend the most on the road carriers. As can be seen, one-kilometre air travel for a passenger is responsible for roughly 375 grams of CO2 emission which is significantly higher than that of other modes of travel. A car passenger contributes to approximately 130 grams CO2 while this is nearly 70 grams for a bus commuter. Coaches, rails and maritime produces almost 50 grams of CO2 for one-kilometre passenger travel. According to the pie chart, more than half of the EU budget is spent on road transport system which is the highest. Nearly one-third of the budget is allocated for the rail transports while one-tenth goes on public transports. Despite emitting the highest CO2 per traveller, air transports receive only 1% of the EU’s budget. All other transport systems receive 1-2% of the EU budget each which is relatively much lower the spending on roads and railways.
The bar chart summaries how much C02
is discharged
for
one-kilometre
travel
by a
passenger
in
different
transportations and the pie chart
shows
the ratio of European Union’s expenditure for a variety of
transport
systems.
Generally
speaking, air
travel
emits the highest amount of Carbon Dioxide and EU spend the most on the road carriers.

As can be
seen
,
one-kilometre
air
travel
for a
passenger
is responsible for roughly 375
grams
of CO2 emission which is
significantly
higher than that of other modes of
travel
. A car
passenger
contributes to approximately 130
grams
CO2 while this is
nearly
70
grams
for a bus commuter. Coaches, rails and maritime produces almost 50
grams
of CO2 for
one-kilometre
passenger
travel.

According to the pie chart, more than half of the EU
budget
is spent
on road
transport
system which is the highest.
Nearly
one-third of the
budget
is allocated
for the rail
transports
while one-tenth goes on public
transports
. Despite emitting the highest CO2 per
traveller
, air
transports
receive
only
1% of the EU’s
budget
. All other
transport
systems receive 1-2% of the EU
budget
each which is
relatively
much lower the spending on roads and railways.
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22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The graph below shows CO<sub>2</sub> emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. v. 1

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