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The graph below shows CO<sub>2</sub> emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. v.2

The graph below shows CO<sub>2</sub> emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. v. 2
The graphs outline the amount of Carbon dioxide emission per passenger from different vehicles in the European Union and the EU expenditures on different modes of transportation. Overall, the highest amount of CO2 per person is emitted by the Air transports and the European Union spends the highest percentage of funds for the road transportation system. According to the bar graph, a single passenger of a personal car is responsible for around 130 gm of CO2 per kilometre while a passenger in a bus contributes to 65 gm CO2 eruption per kilometre. Coaches, maritime and rail passengers emit the lowest amount of CO2 which is about 50 grams per passenger. Finally, an aeroplane traveller contributes to 370 km of CO2 per kilometre which is the highest. Based on the pie chart, the European Union spent the highest amount (52%) on the road transportation system while spent only 1% to 2% on ports, waterway airport intermodal and other transport systems. They spent 31% on the rail system and 10% on the public transportation system. This indicates the European Union spent the majority of the budget on public transportations.
The graphs outline the
amount
of Carbon dioxide emission per
passenger
from
different
vehicles in the European Union and the EU expenditures on
different
modes of
transportation
.
Overall
, the highest
amount
of CO2 per person
is emitted
by the Air transports and the European Union spends the highest percentage of funds for the road
transportation
system.

According to the bar graph, a single
passenger
of a personal car is responsible for around 130 gm of CO2 per
kilometre
while a
passenger
in a bus contributes to 65 gm CO2 eruption per
kilometre
. Coaches, maritime and rail
passengers
emit the lowest
amount
of CO2 which is about 50 grams per
passenger
.
Finally
, an
aeroplane
traveller
contributes to 370 km of CO2 per
kilometre
which is the highest.

Based on the pie chart, the European Union
spent
the highest
amount
(52%) on the road
transportation
system
while
spent
only
1% to 2% on ports, waterway airport intermodal and other transport
systems
. They
spent
31% on the rail
system
and 10% on the public
transportation
system
. This indicates the European Union
spent
the majority of the budget on public
transportations
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph below shows CO<sub>2</sub> emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. v. 2

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