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the bar chart shows scores of 3 teams a, b nd c over four different seasons. summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons were relevant. v.2

the bar chart shows scores of 3 teams a, b nd c over four different seasons.
The bar chart illustrates total points of 3 different teams [ team A, team B and team I] from 2002 to 2005. it is evident that, team B scored far higher than other two teams in all four consecutive seasons. In 2002 team B scores82 points while team A and team cC accounted far less with merely 5 points and 10 points respectively. In the first 3 seasons there was a significant decline in the points of group B from 82 to 43 points even though it managed to keep it' s first place. In the fourth season, there was a noticeable increase in the points of team B to 5 points, whereas team A and team B could score only 8 and 5 points respectively. Interestingly on the other hand, in the first two seasons group C was in second place while team A managed to report as second in 2004 and 2005. However the highest point if team a was 35 points in season three, whereas team C could score only 15 points as it' s highest score in season 2
The bar chart illustrates total
points
of 3
different
teams
[
team
A,
team
B and
team
I] from 2002 to 2005.
it
is evident that,
team
B scored far higher than other two
teams
in all four consecutive seasons.

In 2002
team
B
scores82
points
while
team
A and
team
cC
accounted far less with
merely
5
points
and 10
points
respectively
. In the
first
3
seasons
there was a significant decline in the
points
of group B from 82 to 43
points
even though
it managed to
keep
it&
#039; s
first
place.
In
the fourth
season
, there was a noticeable increase in the
points
of
team
B to 5
points
, whereas
team
A and
team
B could
score
only
8 and 5
points
respectively
.

Interestingly
on the other hand
, in the
first
two
seasons
group C was in second place while
team
A managed to report as second in 2004 and 2005.
However
the highest
point
if
team
a
was
35
points
in
season
three, whereas
team
C could
score
only
15
points
as
it&
#039; s highest
score
in
season
2
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS academic the bar chart shows scores of 3 teams a, b nd c over four different seasons.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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