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The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.
The bar chart shows three teams’ (A, B, C) scores over four consecutive seasons from 2002 to 2005. One profound observation is team B’s dominating performance throughout the years with its scores far exceeding those of the other two teams. Starting off from its peak at 82 points in 2002, team B then lost more than 20 points in the next season and plunged to its record low at 43 points in 2004 before making a recovery in the final season of 2005, finishing at 55 points. An interesting contrast can be seen in team A’s performance. Despite a very modest start with only 5 points, team A doubled its score in the next season before striking the most impressive performance boost in 2004 when it chased closely after the top scorer. However, team A failed to maintain its heights as it scored only 8 points in the final season. Team C experienced some inconsistency in its performance over the years. Its scores fluctuated around 12 points over the first three seasons before plummeting to its rock bottom with only 5 points in 2005.
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from 2002 to 2005.

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B’s dominating
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far exceeding those of the other two
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in 2002,
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B then lost more than 20
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and plunged to its record low at 43
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in 2004
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of 2005, finishing at 55 points.

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doubled its
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striking the most impressive
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boost in 2004 when it

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A failed to maintain its heights as it scored
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Team C experienced
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fluctuated around 12
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points


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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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