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the bar chart below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in Canada Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

the bar chart below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in Canada
The bar chart illustrates the reasons why people from four age groups get stress in Canada. Overall, as people age, they are increasingly more likely to be worried about their health conditions and no specific reason, as opposed to financial and working problems which are deemed to be no longer a major concern for the Canadian later in life. Over 32% of the Canadian aged over 65 experienced stress resulting from no particular reason, accounting for the largest proportion by far. This most common stressor among the elderly was followed by health issues, with figures being 15% and 24%. By contrast, the two younger groups are less likely to be concerned about these problems below 7% of people between 25 and 54 years old and much higher figures of 10 and 16% of the 54-64-year-olds encounter. A majority of the youngest group are under pressure from work, with figure being 25%, which is 10% higher than the proportion for financial instability, the second common cause of stress. A similar pattern is seen among 55-64-year-old people, with figures being considerably smaller at 15% and 14% respectively.
The bar chart illustrates the reasons why
people
from four age groups
get
stress
in Canada.

Overall
, as
people
age, they are
increasingly
more likely to
be worried
about their health conditions and no specific reason, as opposed to financial and working problems which
are deemed
to be no longer a major concern for the Canadian later in life.

Over 32% of the Canadian aged over 65 experienced
stress
resulting from no particular reason, accounting for the largest proportion by far. This most common stressor among the elderly
was followed
by health issues, with
figures
being 15% and 24%. By contrast, the two younger groups are less likely to
be concerned
about these problems below 7% of
people
between 25 and 54 years
old
and much higher
figures
of 10 and 16% of the 54-64-year-olds encounter.

A majority of the youngest group are under pressure from work, with
figure
being 25%, which is 10% higher than the proportion for financial instability, the second common cause of
stress
. A similar pattern is
seen
among 55-64-year-
old
people
, with
figures
being
considerably
smaller at 15% and 14%
respectively
.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic the bar chart below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in Canada

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185 words
6.5
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