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The bar chart below shows the result of a poll of theater-goers on what disturbs them during performances at the theater. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least v.2

The bar chart below shows the result of a poll of theater-goers on what disturbs them during performances at the theater.
The bar chart shows the result of a survey of theater-goers on what annoys them during theater performances.
The bar chart
shows
the result of a survey of theater-goers on what annoys them during theater performances.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the result of a poll of theater-goers on what disturbs them during performances at the theater.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
18 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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