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The bar chart below shows percentage of adults of different age groups inthe UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006 v.2

The bar chart below shows percentage of adults of different age groups inthe UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006 v. 2
The bar chart illustrates the proportions of UK citizens in different age groups who had access to the Internet on their daily basis from 2003 to 2006. It is clear that there was an increase in the percentage of Internet users in each group over the period described, and the Internet was most popular among people aged 16 to 24. In 2003, exactly 80% of 16-to24-year-olds used the Internet, 30% and 35% higher than those of 25-44 and 45-54 groups, respectively. In comparison, only a third of people who were 55 to 64 years old accessed the Internet every day, but no data was recorded for the oldest group. Over the three-year period, Internet usage of the youngest group increased slightly, with its peak being 90% in 2005, compared to a rise of 10% each year of the second youngest group and a steady incline of 5% to 10% in the 55-64 group. With middle-aged people, the percentage of them using the Internet climbed to 60% before falling to 55% in 2006, followed by senior citizens whose Internet usage was always under 15%.
The bar chart illustrates the proportions of UK citizens in
different
age
groups
who had
access


to
the Internet on their daily basis from 2003 to 2006.

It is
clear
that there was an increase in the percentage of Internet users in each
group
over the

period
described
, and the Internet was most popular among
people
aged 16 to 24.

In 2003, exactly 80% of 16-to24-year-olds
used
the Internet, 30% and 35% higher than those

of
25-44 and 45-54
groups
,
respectively
.
In comparison
,
only
a third of
people
who were 55
to


64 years
old
accessed the Internet every day,
but
no data
was recorded
for the oldest group.

Over the three-year period, Internet usage of the youngest
group
increased
slightly
, with its

peak being 90% in 2005, compared to a rise of 10% each year of the second youngest group

and
a steady incline of 5% to 10% in the 55-64
group
. With middle-aged
people
, the percentage of them using the Internet climbed to 60%
before
falling to 55% in 2006, followed by senior citizens whose Internet usage was always under 15%.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS academic The bar chart below shows percentage of adults of different age groups inthe UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006 v. 2

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10 paragraphs
183 words
5.5
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