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The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012. v.2

The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012. v. 2
The chart represents how many British and international students studied a computer science major by its gender in the UK University from 2010 to 2012. Overall, there were more British students than that of international students studied for the computer science for the projected periods. Among them, there was more number of women than that of men. In terms of male students, about 40 British students studied a computer science, whereas 20 international students were in the UK University in 2010. By 2011, UK University experienced to have 25 students in a computer science major for both countries and it rose drastically to reach at about 42 British male students and close to 40 international male students by 2012. Meanwhile, there were higher British women students than that of international students studied the computer science throughout the projected periods. About 32 British students and close to 15 international students studied in the computer science in 2010. In the next two consecutive years, British female students rose significantly to close to 45 students while the number of international students increased constantly to end at 20 students.
The chart represents how
many
British and
international
students
studied
a computer
science
major by its gender in the UK University from 2010 to 2012.

Overall
, there were more British
students
than that of
international
students
studied
for the computer
science
for the projected periods. Among them, there was more number of women than that of
men
.

In terms of male
students
, about 40 British
students
studied
a computer
science
, whereas 20
international
students
were in the UK University in 2010. By 2011, UK University experienced to have 25
students
in a computer
science
major for both countries and it rose
drastically
to reach at about 42 British male
students
and close to 40
international
male
students
by 2012.

Meanwhile, there were higher British women
students
than that of
international
students
studied
the computer
science
throughout the projected periods. About 32 British
students
and close to 15
international
students
studied
in the computer
science
in 2010. In the
next
two consecutive years, British female
students
rose
significantly
to close to 45
students
while the number of
international
students
increased
constantly
to
end
at 20
students
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012. v. 2

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