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Te graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across faculties of a major university in 2012 v.2

Te graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across faculties of a major university in 2012 v. 2
The bar chart below illustrates rate of academic employees of 7 different departments in major universitis by gender in 2012. Overall, most of academic staff in engineering faculty are male, while education  school academic members in universities are mainly female rather than men. Although there is small different in level of genders who work in medicine school but number of female staff is higher at considerable rate. In 2012, about 55% academic workers in art school are women and approximately 42% male, it is interesting point to notice that in same period of time percentage of male and female' s of science and business department are fairly  simillar  by about 63% for men' s and 40 for female' s. According to graph there is significant difference in propration of  staff who work for engineering and education, while in first department rate of male are higher with over than 80% and number of female staff is more than other gender for latter group. In same period of time percentages were equal for people with different gender who taught in major universities.
The bar chart below illustrates rate of
academic
employees of 7
different
departments in major
universitis
by gender in 2012.

Overall
, most of
academic
staff
in engineering faculty are male, while education
 
school
academic
members in universities are
mainly
female
rather
than
men
. Although there is
small
different
in level of genders who work in medicine school
but
number of
female
staff
is higher at considerable rate.

In 2012, about 55%
academic
workers in art school are women and approximately 42% male, it is interesting point to notice that in same period of time percentage of male and
female&
#039; s of science and business department are
fairly
 
simillar
 
by about 63% for
men&
#039; s and 40 for
female&
#039; s. According to graph there is significant difference in
propration
of
 
staff
who work for engineering and education, while in
first
department rate of male are higher with over than 80% and number of
female
staff
is more than other gender for latter group. In same period of time percentages were equal for
people
with
different
gender who taught in major universities.
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13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic Te graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across faculties of a major university in 2012 v. 2

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