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Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The charts show the qualities employers and employees think are important in job seekers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Give rea v.4

Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The charts show the qualities employers and employees think are important in job seekers.
The pie chart and bar chart illustrates us necessary aspects for the employment purposes as well as skills, employers searching for in their employees. In the pie chart, education accounted for 39 %, which is the highest contributor. Next to this is the work experience amounted up to 26 %, slightly more than passion and enthusiasm which cover only 24%. Furthermore, technical skills make up 7%, whereas only 4% is made up of references. In the bar chart, organized skills are the highest entities mentioned in 100 job adverts. The second highest is communication skills which are nearly equal to 60 thousand adverts and nearly the same as motivation. Then, this trend is decreased from qualification to innovation from slightly less than 60 to slightly less than 40 per adverts in a regular manner. Overall, the most important feature in employers for the requirement of the job is education as compared to references which are least. Whereas in terms of qualities, the owners want is an organization more rather than innovation, which is the least desired by them.
The pie
chart
and bar
chart
illustrates us necessary aspects for the employment purposes
as well
as
skills
, employers searching for in their employees.

In the pie
chart
, education accounted for 39 %, which is the highest contributor.
Next
to this is the work experience amounted up to 26 %,
slightly
more than passion and enthusiasm which cover
only
24%.
Furthermore
, technical
skills
make
up 7%, whereas
only
4%
is made
up of references.

In the bar
chart
, organized
skills
are the highest entities mentioned in 100 job adverts. The second highest is communication
skills
which are
nearly
equal to 60 thousand adverts and
nearly
the same as motivation. Then, this trend
is decreased
from qualification to innovation from
slightly
less than 60 to
slightly
less than 40 per adverts
in a regular manner
.

Overall
, the most
important
feature in employers for the requirement of the job is education as compared to references which are least. Whereas in terms of qualities, the owners want is an organization more
rather
than innovation, which is the least desired by them.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS academic Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The charts show the qualities employers and employees think are important in job seekers.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
178 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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