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Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The chart gives information about marriage and children in a selection of countries.
The provided table represents the total number of visitors, who visited to Ashdown Museum and the pie charts illustrate an overview of the satisfaction ratio of the people for after and before refurbishment of the museum. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the higher number of people visited to the museum after refurbishment compared to before refurbishment. In addition, a significant number of people were ' very dissatisfied' before refurbishment; whereas, it was " satisfied" after refurbishment. Total 74, 000 people visited at the Ashdown museum during the year before refurbishment. At that time, the greatest number of people were " dissatisfied" and it was 40 people, while, 30 people were " satisfied" . Moreover, the number of people, who were very satisfied and very dissatisfied was 15 and 10 people respectively. Only 5 people were not responded in the survey. On the other hand, 92, 000 people visited to the museum during the year after refurbishment. At the same time, the highest number of people were " satisfied" and it was 40; in contrast, 15 people were " dissatisfied" . The number of very satisfied people were 35. Additionally, the number of very dissatisfied and No response were equally and it was 5 persons.
The provided table represents the total
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visited
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Ashdown
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Museum
and the pie charts illustrate an overview of the satisfaction ratio of the
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people
for after and
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before
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refurbishment
of the museum.

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people
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visited
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museum
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refurbishment
compared to
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before
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refurbishment
.
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number
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people
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very
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Total 74, 000
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Ashdown
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, who were
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satisfied and
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5
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people
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museum
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people
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8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
40Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes
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IELTS academic Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The chart gives information about marriage and children in a selection of countries.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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