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Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The chart gives information about marriage and children in a selection of countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spe v.5

Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The chart gives information about marriage and children in a selection of countries.
The provided table represents the total number of visitors, who visited to Ashdown Museum and the pie charts illustrate an overview of the satisfaction ratio of the people for after and before refurbishment of the museum. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the higher number of people visited to the museum after refurbishment compared to before refurbishment. In addition, a significant number of people were ' very dissatisfied' before refurbishment; whereas, it was " satisfied" after refurbishment. Total 74, 000 people visited at the Ashdown museum during the year before refurbishment. At that time, the greatest number of people were " dissatisfied" and it was 40 people, while, 30 people were " satisfied" . Moreover, the number of people, who were very satisfied and very dissatisfied was 15 and 10 people respectively. Only 5 people were not responded in the survey. On the other hand, 92, 000 people visited to the museum during the year after refurbishment. At the same time, the highest number of people were " satisfied" and it was 40; in contrast, 15 people were " dissatisfied" . The number of very satisfied people were 35. Additionally, the number of very dissatisfied and No response were equally and it was 5 persons.
The provided table represents the total
number
of visitors, who
visited
to
Ashdown
Museum
and the pie charts illustrate an overview of the satisfaction ratio of the
people
for after and
before
refurbishment
of the museum.

Overall
, it can be
clearly
seen
that the higher
number
of
people
visited
to the
museum
after
refurbishment
compared to
before
refurbishment
.
In addition
, a significant
number
of
people
were '
very
dissatisfied&
#039;
before
refurbishment
; whereas, it was
&quot
;
satisfied&quot
; after refurbishment.

Total 74, 000
people
visited
at the
Ashdown
museum
during the year
before
refurbishment
. At that time, the greatest
number
of
people
were
&quot
;
dissatisfied&quot
; and it was 40
people
, while, 30
people
were
&quot
;
satisfied&quot
;
.
Moreover
, the
number
of
people
, who were
very
satisfied and
very
dissatisfied was 15 and 10
people
respectively
.
Only
5
people
were not responded in the survey.

On the other hand
, 92, 000
people
visited
to the
museum
during the year after
refurbishment
. At the same time, the highest
number
of
people
were
&quot
;
satisfied&quot
; and it was 40;
in contrast
, 15
people
were
&quot
;
dissatisfied&quot
;
.
The
number
of
very
satisfied
people
were 35.
Additionally
, the
number
of
very
dissatisfied and No response were
equally
and it was 5 persons.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
40Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes

IELTS academic Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The chart gives information about marriage and children in a selection of countries.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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