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Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The charts show where people get their news and how much they trust these sources. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spen v.3

Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The charts show where people get their news and how much they trust these sources.
The two tables provide information about usage of news sources in the past week and users' levels of trust in these sources. Overall, the general trend is for more popular sources to be voted as more trustworthy, except for radio news and magazines, which boast relatively high levels of credibility despite being used by smaller proportions of people. Also, there is often a large difference between the percentage of people voting a medium to be reliable and that of their counterparts. In detail, the vast majority of people relied on local TV news (more than 80%), which is followed by figures for national network and newspapers (72% and 65%, respectively). Their levels of credibility also range from above half for local TV news to around 42% for newspapers. Similarly, online-only sources were used by around 50% and only half of which trusted these sources. The correlation is discontinued at radio news and magazines. While the former attracted less than 60% of users but is voted to be reliable by nearly a half, close to 40% of users read the latter and vote it to be reliable. It is noteworthy, still, that while the typical distrust levels stand at around one tenth for most media, news sources on the Internet were disapproved by double that figure.
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news
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sources
in the past week and
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levels
of trust in these sources.

Overall
, the general trend is for more popular
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sources
to
be voted
as more trustworthy,
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except for
radio
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news
and magazines, which boast
relatively
high
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levels
of credibility despite being
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used
by smaller proportions of
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people
.
Also
, there is
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often
a large difference between the percentage of
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people
voting a medium to be reliable and that of their counterparts.

In detail, the vast majority of
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people
relied on local TV
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news
(more than 80%), which
is followed
by figures for national network and newspapers (72% and 65%,
respectively
). Their
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levels
of credibility
also
range from above half for local TV
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news
to around 42% for newspapers.
Similarly
, online-
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only
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sources
were
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used
by around 50% and
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only
half of which trusted these
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sources
. The correlation
is discontinued
at radio
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news
and magazines. While the former attracted less than 60% of users
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but
is voted
to be reliable by
nearly
a half, close to 40% of users read the latter and vote it to be reliable.

It is noteworthy,
still
, that while the typical distrust
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levels
stand at around one tenth for most media,
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news
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sources
on the Internet
were disapproved
by double that figure.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic Take a look at the graphics and complete the task. The charts show where people get their news and how much they trust these sources.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
215 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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